I love the game, Adam's behavior is fascinating, I'm curious about his origins, and I'm excited to see what happens next! But I'm confused about the MC's gender (because "nieces" means girl here), so I wonder if MC's are fixed or if "YOU" is "YOU"? This will change the way I describe MC when making game live
This was awesome! I've been getting into the dark visual novels lately and this one was great :D You did a good job and I can't wait for updates. I am uploading to my YouTube ^-^ I only did one ending as I am sick at the moment but I will go back to do more once I am better :)
This is a cool visual novel! It's pretty different from what I expected but the settup for Adam is really cool, being able to see the glimpse of his life through those small dialogues makes me have a rough idea of what happened to him as well as his character design, he truly does look intimidating but also cute (IN THE BAD END 1 ROUTE IT'S NOTE FAIR DON'T BE CUTE YOU MADMAN) and I love the MC, them being horny in the first bad end made me want to laugh tho I did get sufficiently spooked by the stabby stab. But I also love how in the very end, MC truly didn't want anyone to have the last laugh, even if it meant them dying. I'm super curious how things will develop after the Good End?, especially since MC can't even come forward and say "Yo, the lead singer of CAKE is mad wack" cause they don't even have any proof, pretty much left vulnerable while Adam himself has connections (is it because he's an idol or is the idol just a dayjob for his much darker job??) and could sniff out MC, especially if he noticed the car plate number. I do hope MC can make it out alive but it'll be a serious fight, poor MC, they were literally just a normal person and Adam decided "Hm... No."
Great visual novel tho! For it being your first game it's really impressive! Hope the development is going a-okay and that the visual novel is really promising! Can't wait for more news about it~!
I really liked this! First play through I got the first bad end, second got the good end, and then went back to get the other two just to see! Good writing and the art is wonderful :) The only thing I might say is the visual of inside the car is a bit hard on my eyes, but that could totally just be a me thing since my sight can be fairly sensitive. I'm looking forward to seeing where this game goes though! ♥
In the demo there's currently four endings. In a beefed up version of the demo which I'm working on I hope to add more. As for the regular game, it's a secret! :)
I just finished playing it and I LOVE it! The story is SUPER interesting and while at first I thought Adam was very dislikable, he's really WORMED his way into my heart (get it, wormed cuz...cuz ..apples...). I will make a video on it soon!
The endings were certainly interesting, being so diverse in nature - all of them. The `Good ending...?` definitely got a chuckle out of me, once I have seen him a little bit unstable. Very sweet twist! Also, interesting depiciton of delusions; he is clearly battling some demons. Thanks for making this. Looking forward to the next updates!
I LOVED the game. It was just long enough to learn about Adam and get all the endings. From what we read on the newspaper, we've been missing for 5 days, so there isn't really much hope :'( I wished we survived *^*
Actually that isn't YOU in the newspaper! :) If you got the good ending you survived. The person however just happens to be a previous victim of Adam's which will be addressed later in the bigger version of the game.
It's perfect. I can't wait to see when you fully release it. I like how you mixed different themes in both endings. I'm looking forward to Adam's story and how he became like this. I also wonder how her family and others are going to react to her injuries and if they'll believe her.
I sent a mac version to some testers to see how it'll do. I'm not sure what the differences will be but will keep you posted if everything goes okay and will add mac as soon as possible if we discover it works! :)
I mean, we're ALIVE. I'd count that as a Good End! The longer we survive the better, right? ...right? Adam's such a pretty baby. I saw this bad boy on Twitter. I like it so far. Though, it also sounds like we'll be getting some religious trauma/parental trauma...?
I'm terrified for when those two get added to the trigger warnings, but also excited because it'll mean that we've got more story!
Aww thank you so so much for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I can't wait to share the rest of the story with you. It's gonna be a bit of a ride from here on out.
Yooo this is really good! I got the bad ending at first (whoops hehe) but after playing again it was super intriguing! I love how Adam is a complex character and so unexpectable. Can't wait to see more :)
Thank you so much for playing and I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yeah he has a lot of stuff hidden beneath the surface. It'll be fun to slowly reveal it all!
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Not that it was bad it was great!! I just get uncomfortable easily 🙃
Can't wait for the whole game to come out!! If it's free definitely going to play it on the channel!!😆
Keep up the good work and stay safe!! 👍
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good endd my ass xD, good end because i didnt die but hes still gonna hunt my ass down
that was a good short demo, im definitely looking forward to the full game
rooting you on~
I love the game, Adam's behavior is fascinating, I'm curious about his origins, and I'm excited to see what happens next! But I'm confused about the MC's gender (because "nieces" means girl here), so I wonder if MC's are fixed or if "YOU" is "YOU"? This will change the way I describe MC when making game live
what my thoughts exactly
mentally ill and obsessive anime men with knives are my favorite <3
Get my boy some therapy!!! I loved watching this on youtube, i am definitely interested in subbing to your patreon when it's all set up
I'm so excited for the full game, hopefully I'll have my pc by then! Thank you so much and I hope the development continues smoothly :)
I really enjoyed this Demo.
The MC isn´t as stupid as most MCs I know from visual novels; and Adam´s character is also written pretty interesting.
I really loved this game so far.
I can´t wait for the full release and wouldnät even mind to pay for it later on.
Keep up the good work! ^^
This was awesome! I've been getting into the dark visual novels lately and this one was great :D You did a good job and I can't wait for updates. I am uploading to my YouTube ^-^ I only did one ending as I am sick at the moment but I will go back to do more once I am better :)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And thank you for sharing on your channel! :)
This is a cool visual novel! It's pretty different from what I expected but the settup for Adam is really cool, being able to see the glimpse of his life through those small dialogues makes me have a rough idea of what happened to him as well as his character design, he truly does look intimidating but also cute (IN THE BAD END 1 ROUTE IT'S NOTE FAIR DON'T BE CUTE YOU MADMAN) and I love the MC, them being horny in the first bad end made me want to laugh tho I did get sufficiently spooked by the stabby stab. But I also love how in the very end, MC truly didn't want anyone to have the last laugh, even if it meant them dying. I'm super curious how things will develop after the Good End?, especially since MC can't even come forward and say "Yo, the lead singer of CAKE is mad wack" cause they don't even have any proof, pretty much left vulnerable while Adam himself has connections (is it because he's an idol or is the idol just a dayjob for his much darker job??) and could sniff out MC, especially if he noticed the car plate number. I do hope MC can make it out alive but it'll be a serious fight, poor MC, they were literally just a normal person and Adam decided "Hm... No."
Great visual novel tho! For it being your first game it's really impressive! Hope the development is going a-okay and that the visual novel is really promising! Can't wait for more news about it~!
This honestly made me so happy to hear! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I cant wait to share what's next!
I really liked this! First play through I got the first bad end, second got the good end, and then went back to get the other two just to see! Good writing and the art is wonderful :) The only thing I might say is the visual of inside the car is a bit hard on my eyes, but that could totally just be a me thing since my sight can be fairly sensitive. I'm looking forward to seeing where this game goes though! ♥
Thank you for your kind comment and I'll see about fixing it so it's not as hard on the eyes. Tysm! 💙
How many endings are there? If I may ask😊
In the demo there's currently four endings. In a beefed up version of the demo which I'm working on I hope to add more. As for the regular game, it's a secret! :)
Okay, thank you so much!!😁
this is fantastic!! I genuinely adore this visual novel so far, I can't wait to see more!! Do you have anywhere to follow for updates and such?
Yes! I tend to share upcoming things about the games development on twitter. I think my itch.io profile has a link to it! :)
i LOVED it i cannot wait for more if someone asked me to rate it out of ten it would be a million out of ten
That's so sweet of you to say! Thank you so much!
do you have a patreon or something i can donate to in order to help the development of this game?
Currently setting one up! I was just hoping to add a few things for new patrons before sharing it. That's really sweet of you to ask! :)
https://youtu.be/AOyTMKR1Zj0
https://www.youtube.com/c/Z9GNET?sub_confirmation=1
Thank you so much for playing and sharing my game! :)
loved it please make more im begging you its too good anyway i think who is reading this and hasnt played the game play it its really good
I can't wait to share the rest of the story with all of you so you can bet on it! Thank you so so much for playing!
I just finished playing it and I LOVE it! The story is SUPER interesting and while at first I thought Adam was very dislikable, he's really WORMED his way into my heart (get it, wormed cuz...cuz ..apples...). I will make a video on it soon!
🤣 that genuinely got a giggle out of me! And thank you so much for playing it! I look forward to your video!
I LOVE IT, me encanta, lo amo!
Tysm for your kind comment!!!
The endings were certainly interesting, being so diverse in nature - all of them. The `Good ending...?` definitely got a chuckle out of me, once I have seen him a little bit unstable. Very sweet twist! Also, interesting depiciton of delusions; he is clearly battling some demons. Thanks for making this. Looking forward to the next updates!
Ah thank you so much! And I look forward to sharing them!
I LOVED the game. It was just long enough to learn about Adam and get all the endings. From what we read on the newspaper, we've been missing for 5 days, so there isn't really much hope :'( I wished we survived *^*
Actually that isn't YOU in the newspaper! :) If you got the good ending you survived. The person however just happens to be a previous victim of Adam's which will be addressed later in the bigger version of the game.
AHHH! :D I see! so glad it wasn't us on the news! Looking forward to play the full version!! :)
IM OBSESSED CANT WAIT FOR FULL GOOD ENDING Gkfdnjkgndsjkvgndkjfnvgfdjhbjdh.
Ahhhh! I'm so glad you really liked it! Thank you so so much for your kind words
Omg! I'm so glad you think it does! I hope it was a fun experience to play and thank you so much for sharing!
This is really good! The cover of the game is what really got me hooked. I hope that the "good ending" will be expanded on.
I'm so glad you like it and thank you so much for playing it!!!
AHHHH!
It's perfect. I can't wait to see when you fully release it. I like how you mixed different themes in both endings. I'm looking forward to Adam's story and how he became like this. I also wonder how her family and others are going to react to her injuries and if they'll believe her.
The Mac version did work so thank you.
oh my goodness...Pls I want him :( Since this is a prologue is there a fully good ending?
We shall have to see! :)
Is a Mac version going to be available? I want to play it since I saw it earlier on Twitter. And it looks very promising.
I sent a mac version to some testers to see how it'll do. I'm not sure what the differences will be but will keep you posted if everything goes okay and will add mac as soon as possible if we discover it works! :)
Released a Mac version! Hopefully it works for you. :)
The cover really hooked me up and immediately clicked on it xD haven't play it yet but its intruding and +1 waiting for the next update
I'm glad it caught your attention! I hope you enjoy the game when you get a chance to play
Seeing the question mark on the "Good End" xD
I mean, we're ALIVE. I'd count that as a Good End! The longer we survive the better, right? ...right? Adam's such a pretty baby. I saw this bad boy on Twitter. I like it so far. Though, it also sounds like we'll be getting some religious trauma/parental trauma...?
I'm terrified for when those two get added to the trigger warnings, but also excited because it'll mean that we've got more story!
Aww thank you so so much for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I can't wait to share the rest of the story with you. It's gonna be a bit of a ride from here on out.
Yooo this is really good! I got the bad ending at first (whoops hehe) but after playing again it was super intriguing! I love how Adam is a complex character and so unexpectable. Can't wait to see more :)
Thank you so much for playing and I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yeah he has a lot of stuff hidden beneath the surface. It'll be fun to slowly reveal it all!